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From: David Stodolsky <>
Subject: Re: Article to be published in Free Inquiry
Date: Mon, 25 Jun 2007 11:25:06 +0200

On 24 Jun 2007, at 16:02,  wrote:

> This may be enough  for
> preservation of the human mind,

"mind" should not be treated as a noun. "Brain" would be better here.


> cryonics is not a guaranteed ticket  to the future, but is a     
> best efforts

'effort' is normally used, it is already plural.



dss

David Stodolsky    Skype: davidstodolsky

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